tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6335924932666598467.post6452383824717071100..comments2023-03-30T05:26:03.994-07:00Comments on ~MoonKissed Romantica: Illuminating Musings~: ~*Enlightened By Darkness*~ Editorial Pitch to PublisherLuna Ella Aldorahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01403439066437837170noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6335924932666598467.post-78332304653256615972011-03-15T15:11:35.882-07:002011-03-15T15:11:35.882-07:00Hi Lucy. Good to see you! I like that and it defin...Hi Lucy. Good to see you! I like that and it definitely strips it down. <br /><br />Going by what you suggested and what the guidelines want:<i><br /><br />Paralyzed from the waist down, school teacher Gwyn uses a wheelchair to aid in her mobility. Lost in the darkness of a defeatist attitude, Gwyn believes her limitations hold her back from enjoying a full life. But one night, she is accosted by a dark and mysterious stranger. Intent on keeping her safe from harm, he spirits her away (chair and all) and promises her Sanctuary.<br /><br />Ciernan, a vampyre who loathes humans and their weaknesses is bound to an accursed brother. In rescuing Gwyn, he is forced to face his past and reevaluate his existence. But the vampyress who created him has been lurking in the shadows, waiting for someone to fall victim to his charms... Will Gwyn be able to trust Ciernan enough to give herself over to him completely? Does Ciernan's frozen heart even have the capability to love? Together, they must fight the dark forces (within and without) which seek to tear them apart.</i><br /><br />Do you think we need to know more about his brother in the blurb? Or just to know that he is connected to him and his past, is enough for editors?<br /><br />Thanks, I appreciate your help. I knew you would have some ideas for me. Hear anything back, yet? :)<br /><br />~LunaLunaEllaAldorahttp://moonkissedromantica.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6335924932666598467.post-9822630614699832832011-03-15T13:10:00.796-07:002011-03-15T13:10:00.796-07:00*waves* Hi Ravenfox, welcome to the Blog. :)
Than...*waves* Hi Ravenfox, welcome to the Blog. :)<br /><br />Thank you for your input. I also changed a few other parts. I feel the second one is stronger, but wasn't sure if too wordy. I'm going to post the revision.<br /><br />Let me know what you think? <br /><br />~LunaLunaEllaAldorahttp://moonkissedromantica.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6335924932666598467.post-32040058029418216092011-03-15T12:45:37.152-07:002011-03-15T12:45:37.152-07:00I like the second one best
~Raven Fox~I like the second one best<br /><br />~Raven Fox~RavenFoxAudiohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15362206183966460773noreply@blogger.com