Woohoo! It's my third Flash Fiction Friday with the Flashers writing group. Enjoy! ;)
Flash Fiction Friday - Writing challenge based on a picture prompt. One picture to inspire one hundred words (no more, no less).
~Be-Long~
“You don't belong here.” Fingertips touched mine, lips brushing my hand. Breath rattled in my chest and my heart squeezed painfully. Warmth enveloped coldness.
Every muscle burned in remembrance, anguished. “I belong with you.”
“Not like this.” He released, but I held on.
“I can feel you.” Climbing up, I scrambled to reclaim him.
“This can't go on.” He shook his head, coming closer. “Let me go.”
“How?” My foot hesitated.
“Get off the ledge. Live,” he ordered.
“I'm still with you." He reached up “Here,” touched my heart, pushed.
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16 comments:
Very moving. Loved it!!
How very sad. I wanted them together. Not for one to push the other away. I like happy endings.
This very interesting Luna. I'm wondering what is going on. There are many ideas. Is his lover 'really' on a ledge and was literally pushed off...or was it metaphorical. :ponders:
Erika
Awww, he pushed him away. It's like a sad love story. No matter how much he pushes, his lover will always love him. *sob*
oh wow! I'm seeing this as the spirit of his deceased lover, encouraging him to live!
Great post!
Deep and thoughtful. nice FFF, Luna, love is so tough sometimes.
Aww, I hope they make it through. Touching. Patti Logan
oh so sad, so touching!! thay have to work it out... I want happy endings..I know, not every story have a happy ending *sighs*
Very sassy and sweet
So sweet. Loved it!
Awww - so sweet :)
Wow! Very moving. Loved your FFF!
Moving and touching, those are the two words that sprung into my head when I read this post. Very good Ms Luna - I like your style.
Oh I would love to read more of these two! :D
Thank you everyone for your wonderful comments and thoughts! I did take this in an otherworldly direction, for anyone who was wondering. I could share a bit more about the scenario, if you'd like.
Now, I'm off to finish commenting on all of yours. Again, I'm amazed at how many boundless interpretations there are for one picture! :)
~Luna
Loved this post, tender and emotional!
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