Woohoo! It's my sixth Flash Fiction Friday with the Flashers writing group. The group is going and it's awesome. Enjoy! ;)
Flash Fiction Friday - Writing challenge based on a picture prompt. One picture to inspire one hundred words (no more, no less).
Respite
Cary peeked around the suite's doorjamb waiting to ambush Devon. He had plans for him. Big plans that included ice skating in the park, roasting marshmallows, trading beer for fine wine, and making passionate love. He knew it had been a tough couple months for Dev and had suggested the brief respite.
He admired Devon's lithe body, but admitted to himself he missed the muscled physique. Cary was always the slighter and had enjoyed his love's strength and power.
Sensing Cary watching him, Devon turned his head.
Sensing Cary watching him, Devon turned his head.
“I'm in re-remission,” he stuttered, sliding to the floor, dropping the phone.
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15 comments:
Oh, I wasn't expeting the end!! great post, really really good!
Oh, thank God, Dev's in remission. Now they really have something to celebrate. Great post!
Wow! Nice twist. :) Awesome! Got me hooked.
Wow, totally different direction. Making us guess here on what happens next...I love this!
Great post! Loved your interpretation, it fits the picture so well!
Wow Luna, that was deep. I loved the twist at the end. I wanted it to continue. Great job!
Loved the twist at the end. Great post.
Luna, great post. Very emotional and deep.
Excellent twist, and a damn fine job, Luna. I'd love to read more...
Great post! so emotional!
Great emotional twist and FFF. Well done!
Oh yeah, remission. Loved it. How cute and now they can celebrate.
Wow, that was unexpected. Great post!
SLira aka BL/MichaelM/Rawiya
Fabulous take on the phot. Loved it!!
Very powerful!!
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