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Thursday, December 1, 2011

Flash Fiction Friday #4- Innocence

Woohoo! It's my fourth Flash Fiction Friday with the Flashers writing group. Enjoy! ;)




Flash Fiction Friday - Writing challenge based on a picture prompt. One picture to inspire one hundred words (no more, no less).

(Note: ALL persons are of legal age! Explaining ages didn't fit in the Flash Fiction story. Thanks Bonni for bringing it up and checking on that.)

I peered through the keyhole of my sister's bedroom stifling a gasp. Not only did she have a boy in her room, she'd snuck into Mom's closet and was trying on her vintage clothing. Busted!


“Shh, my sister's home from college and is going to hear.” Olivia giggled as he slid his hand over to cup her bare breast. This was no boy. This was a man about to take advantage of my innocent little sister.


I turned the knob, halting as she flipped over, crawled up to him, a come-hither expression on her face. Innocence, or feigned innocence?


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17 comments:

Davee said...

Very saucy, Luna. I must admit though, if it was my sister, I would own that guys balls! LOL

LunaEllaAldora said...

Thanks, Davee. Me too! Trust me, somehow enough adrenaline pumped for me to throw a boy across the room one summer when a boy hurt my little sister. Being her chaperone sucked, but I got my point across to boys and men, alike during that time.

"She's under-aged jail-bait. I might look tiny, but I can make your life miserable if you don't back the fuck off." *blush*

Bonni S. said...

Hopefully the sister is of age. That being said I like the angle you've taken with this post. We all see something different and that's what it's all about. Well done.

Luna Ella Aldora said...

Bonni yes she's of age. Lemme put up disclaimer! I had that in the original blurb, but it put me two words over. *Laughs* Fixing now. Thanks for pointing it out.

Erika said...

awesome Luna! I loved this, well done.
Erika

yvonnenicolas said...

*snicker* Nice! Of course if it was me, I wouldn't have been stealthy with it at all. I would've busted in the room like the police and ran him out the house in his drawers. Great post.

Kay said...

Great job Luna...I think I would have waited to see what my sister would do before I did anything..She is of age and it looks like this isn't the first time...that's just me...

LunaEllaAldora said...

Thanks guys. Thanks for the prompt Erika!

Yvonne, I could totally imagine you doing just that. *smirk*

Kay, same here. The situation with my sister when we were teens was different than this one. Olivia here is a consenting young woman of legal age. Who knows, maybe big sis is a bit jealous. ;)

Naomi said...

Very saucy

Jade said...

Oh the devilish wicked sister!! I hava one just like that!!
great post :)

Lindsey said...

Maybe little sis will teach her a thing or two. Love your view of this pic.

Havan said...

I hate to break it to you but your sister is all grown up and knows what she wants! lol

Lee Brazil said...

I suppose its slimy of me to say maybe they could share?

Great post! <3

Chris Quinton said...

Great interpretation of the pic!

Cassandre Dayne said...

Great post - loved the take off

gemma parkes said...

Great 100! We all see something different, but l am really going to have to wear my glasses when l do these, l thought it was two girls! lol!

Sherri Hayes said...

Can you say Blackmail!