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Thursday, December 29, 2011

Flash Fiction Friday #8 - Prize

Woohoo! It's my eighth Flash Fiction Friday with the Flashers writing group. The group is growing and it's awesome. Enjoy this naughty bit of fun this week! ;) And please feel free to comment. Thanks!



Flash Fiction Friday - Writing challenge based on a picture prompt. One picture to inspire one hundred words (no more, no less).





 Prize

Ash watched Saskia saunter over to the table.



“Bet I can take you both on,” she sassed the men.



Erik choked on his beer as the goddess sat. Her green eyes stared into his soul, enthralling him.



“What's the prize?” Daniel sized up the long-legged vixen.



“Whoever beats me, fucks me.”



They exchanged glances. “If we both beat you?” Daniel questioned.



“Menage.”



“We're in.” They agreed.


*



“I get so wet when you toy...” Ash said between Saskia's thighs.



“Less talking, Ashlea,” Saskia quipped, moaning as her girlfriend drove her over the edge... 

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22 comments:

Jade said...

Ahhh I just love menage!! great post!

Bonni S. said...

Ooh a menage. I love that idea. Well done!

Jean said...

Love the "everyone wins" menage idea! Made me smile. Nicely done.

Naomi said...

very tasty, loved it

ERP said...

Crafty indeed. Nice job Chica. So, wait how many girls were there? lol

I had to go back and re-read it.

Nice job on the menage angle. :grins:

E~

Davee said...

wow, hot, nice FFF!

Luna Ella Aldora said...

Thanks! Two girls. Two boys. Only two of the four get lucky. *laughs* Sorry for the menage fans!

ERP said...

Aha! I see now. Two men get nothing, the girls get their rocks off.. tease!! LOL

Luna Ella Aldora said...

*giggles* You got it! Why, THANK you! Oh wait, you meant Saskia? ;)

Yvonne Nicolas said...

She beat both guys? That's a bad girl. Nice post! :o)

Benjamin Tiberius Russell said...

Luna, I had to read this twice to absorb all the implications. The way I read it, she was just teasing the boys to get her girlfriend Ash hot. She knew she could whip both their asses and she did. That's why at the end, it was Ash dining between her legs and not one of them.

That's my story and I'm sticking to it. I like that scenario - I just wish I could be the room to watch the two ladies.

Luna Ella Aldora said...

Benjamin, you're absolutely right! She knew and she ruled, and her girlfriend, the true victor, (not enough space for more words) reaped the benefits. *grins* They might have let you watch. Thanks!

gemma parkes said...

Clever, leave them panting! Great post!

Sara York said...

Very nice. Glad they both get a chance.

Lee Brazil said...

Nice post!

Sherri Hayes said...

Totally missed that there were 4 of them at the begining. Loved that the boys got their butts kicked. :)

Katie Harper said...

Alright people, don't you know the rules. Speaking while your head is between a woman's legs is very, very bad manners. Didn't your mothers teach you anything?

GREAT JOB!!

Rolling Muse In The Roses said...

mmmm yummm nice gf!!! yummy FFF!

BLMorticia said...

Nicely done. Very sexy!

VenusBookluvr said...

Great job of thinking beyond the photo -- well done!

Author Cyril J. Michael said...

So looks like woman (winner) took all ;-) Great twist!

Lisa Worrall said...

Well done :)